All Comments on 'Hottest Girl in the World'

BELIEVE IT , I HAVE A COUSIN WHO WAS JUST LIKE THAT WITH ME . OF COURSE WE MADE OUR OWN WAYS IN LIFE AND ARE NOW MUCH OLDER BUT YOU BROUGHT BACK HAPPY MEMORIES . THANKS .

BYE THE WAY, WE STILL ARE GREAT FRIENDS AND KEEP IN TOUCH BUT NOT SEXUALLY .

Loved it. Please post more and continue their adventures in discovery.

Hmmmm.....So their Mums are sisters. And their Mum is going to be replace by their baby as being back to the 100%-blood. I hope that her ovulating period is going to occur during that week that they Mums are gone?

Would love to hear and see more from this "couple"

Also hope there will be a sequel to this story. Would enjoy hearing more of the cousinds getting up to more sexual adventures. Keep writing stories like these.

Mike

either delete it and run through a good editor or have a GOOD WRITER rewrite it as is this sucks way to many wrong words etc. STOP WRITING UNTIL YOU ARE WILLING TO USE A GOOD EDITOR.

Ho hum. All of these kids that never saw a nude girl all have 8 in cocks,.in past her cervix,.came 10 times ?

Grow up, learn the female body, get real knuckle head.

way to many STUPID errors like WRONG WORDS they are spelled right just the WRONG ONES makes this writer look like a major hack.

Love the story and the premise. Felt a little rushed. You really need to proof read. It is okay if you delay publishing until you reread the story and clean up all the grammar. It makes for a smoother read and it is also more enjoyable. I gave you four stars because of the grammar.

She was ready.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Slam...Bang...Thank you Mamm

What a perfect dream