by LuciousBi-Writes4U
Why didn't you offer this as one longer submission? I think it might have read better and you would have avoided anyone feeling short-changed as each piece was read.
hi,
from teh author...
yes, it does short change it a bit...but each chapter is worth a point a each in the survivor contest...so that's the price we pay! LOL ;)
thanks for baring with it! gotta get the most points for your words in this contest! LOL ;)
thanks for reading and commenting and your understanding of the strange posting process!
kisses,
LuciousBi-Writes4U
Sack already said it. I understand your reasoning though.
Good luck.
Black Tulip
seperate the disintegration...I thought was clever...of course sack finds faults with everything...so don't think you needed to change your literary creation for him <grin>
nice tale...and good luck Hun~
happy halloween