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Natalie's Substitute

byAnson Macabre©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/08/05

Heh heh heh

Very funny at the end. Heh, "She knew all her parents secrets", that sounds so much like a teenaged girl, it's not even funny. It's beautifully written, great dialoge, and wonderful seduction. Could use a bit better description of the surrounds, but all in all, I did enjoy it.

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by Anonymous10/08/05

:D

:D

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by Anonymous10/08/05

good

carry on to part2

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by Anonymous10/08/05

special

excellent writing and great read cant wait for part two

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by Anonymous10/08/05

Hilarious and Hot!

Very hot story! And the ending cracked me up! You can't leave it like this! I'll be waiting for part two. :)

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by Anonymous10/09/05

...

Someone's a Jersey native...

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by Bryian R11/25/05

Good story

It's a familiar plot with an interracial twist. I loved the way the lil white girl pressured the black teacher to give in, proving that all humans enjoy passion and lust no matter what color you are. Fabulous!

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