All Comments on 'A Box, a Woman and Time Ch. 02'

Another excellently crafted chapter. Loved it but, if I have a criticism, the sex scenes are not erotic (not for me anyway). I’m asking myself why. Maybe it’s the third person but I think not. Perhaps it’s because, while the description is clinical in its detail, the emotions of the players are not well exposed. Nevertheless, it’s good writing.

That should have read "second person" of course.

full of surprises. Much enjoyed.