by Tony155
I felt I was a "fly on the wall", so vivid was your storytelling. Superb!
I thought that this story was extremely erotic.
It most certainly got my blood going. I do wonder about something. Was this a resubmission of an earlier story that I read in the archives? I could swear that I read this, or something similar, before.
I just love your stories they are so detailed and wonderful. Keep up the good work!
Great scary-erotic story, just like I like them. Felt like I was there. Thanks D.
I was rather surprised when I realized the setting of this story. I live 20 minutes away and have visited the Reformatory many times, which gave this story a surprising little kick. Thanks!
You set up an exciting scenario, but wrote it as if it were real instead of letting yourself go. Why have the husband get the wife out of the jail cell, when it would have been hotter to see what the ghost did to them? Why have them act coy and afraid of getting caught as if were real, when it was a story where you could have had the crowds disappear? You spent too much time on the ghost hunting than the sex, and that was disappointing as well. Next time, go for it