All Comments on 'Phallic Worship'

by Selena_Kitt

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Lady ClarissaLady Clarissaover 18 years ago
Very clever!

This is a fabulous poem, it has all the rhythm and cadence of a prayer - but of course this one wouldn't be heard in church :-o.

Well done!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Talk about sensory overload!

It's HOT!

But I prefer worship

at another altar...

sacksackover 18 years ago
great stuff...

and you pace this quite well. Vivid, powerful writing. Bravo to you!

CumSlurpingCuckoldCumSlurpingCuckoldalmost 8 years ago
As it should be.

I love sucking BBC.

atomicsoul1atomicsoul1almost 7 years ago
very sexy, to retain a stimulating erotic act with lyrical rhythmic prose is no easy accomplishmen. you are a genius

hh

yy

tazz317tazz317almost 7 years ago
AND YET YOU BOWED AND PRAYED

for the cumming that was made, TK U MLJ LV NV

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