All Comments on 'Office Taboo'

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mummys dirty angelmummys dirty angelover 18 years ago
first time effort...

very very good! Thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope there will be a 2nd chapter to see how these two progress in their naughtiness! xxx

tabithajonestabithajonesover 18 years ago
Well done Alison

I really enjoyed reading this and became very aroused! Please do write more - you have a natural talent for it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hot and just the right amount of story and sex!

Great scenes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hot.

Please keep writing - I will look out for more stories! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow

Wow very intense, erotic and full of suprises. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Excellent story

Excellent story.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 10 years ago
Wonderfu!

I've read this story so many times. I still enjoy it. The dialogue, the changing perspectives, the melding together of two passions, experience helping innocence... all were well done.

Have you considered writing more about these two? Whether you do or not, I think you have some excellent talent. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
After hours

I really liked the way that you had the older more experienced woman lust for the younger just out of high school very inexperienced girl. I thought that the way that you got the older women to seduce the younger girl was actually very believable. She took her time and made the younger girl respond to her advances.

If it wasn't a real story it was written quite well.

Thanks for taking time to read my comment

As always. Betsey

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Fuck me boss!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
MORE

You should DEFINITELY write MORE stories like these and a sequel too

Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
Got a lot of character.

I really liked the tempting tease. Hope there will be more.

5🌟's

fran969fran969almost 2 years ago

As i've said before, I can tell when a story is by a woman because she know the anatomy of a female and here emotional needs..AAAAA+++++

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Seeing as ofc u no longer use this

Can someone else take this over from u as u ain’t used this for ages

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