by Mike Franklin
I've got goosebumps, this story was REALLY well done (and hot), well written, great dialogue, good characterization, fantastic twist at the end, and PERFECT title! Loved it! Good luck in the contest!
a slut getting fucked by three ghosts is definitely something different. Well written and great idea but you sure made the girl into a slut. Good luck with the contest.
the sex with ghosts thing kind of makes me horny. Maybe it's just cuz of your excellent descriptions of the ghostly sex ;) Anyhow, good luck with the contest.
Your story grabbed really my attention. I couldn't stop reading it.
I loved the flow of the story, and the attention to details that grabbed and kept my attention from start to finish. Well done.