All Comments on 'Ghost Riders'

by Mike Franklin

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Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 18 years ago
Wow!

I've got goosebumps, this story was REALLY well done (and hot), well written, great dialogue, good characterization, fantastic twist at the end, and PERFECT title! Loved it! Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Well,

a slut getting fucked by three ghosts is definitely something different. Well written and great idea but you sure made the girl into a slut. Good luck with the contest.

AliyahlovinsexAliyahlovinsexover 18 years ago
For some odd reason...

the sex with ghosts thing kind of makes me horny. Maybe it's just cuz of your excellent descriptions of the ghostly sex ;) Anyhow, good luck with the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
GREAT STORY EVER!!!!

this is a great story!!! best ever so far!!! tks

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Hot

Loved this story, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Attention Getter!

Your story grabbed really my attention. I couldn't stop reading it.

WhisperingWillowWhisperingWillowover 9 years ago
A real gem!

I loved the flow of the story, and the attention to details that grabbed and kept my attention from start to finish. Well done.

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