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by Anonymous

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by ethanjones194310/10/05

Great

Great story, sexy and romantic at the same time

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by 10/10/05

Very sweet

and nicely written.

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by Anonymous10/10/05

Loveable

Smooth flowing and pleasant read.

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by Anonymous10/14/05

Loved and lovely

She asked for his love - and he loved her.
Wow! I loved it, too.
Lukas

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by Anonymous01/14/06

Beautifully written

A beautiful story - beautifully written with a lot of compassion, mixed with just enough passion to make it highly enticing!

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by Anonymous04/02/10

How sweet

I loved this story very gentle and loving yet sexual and passionate great read you have a talent

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