by oggbashan
That was a fast, fun read, Og. Good job with the setting. Whatever the couple had for supper should become number one of the "avoid" list.
Rumple
This was awesome! Fantastic idea, beautifully executed (if you will pardon the pun :) Bravo!
A good length, humorous, macabre, too bad you don't qualify to win the contest this time!
Another fine work by one of the best.
What else could I say?
Your story was very creepy. I think maybe a bit more detail of the people woulda been nice. At least for me. But even with the shortness it was an excellent Halloween story. Good job :) And Good luck with the contest!
as has been said by others. Short but good. Ar first, I thought there might have been too much description of the costumes, but then I realized it was part of the story, and necessary. The sex part was not at all erotic.
Excellent story Oggs!!!!!! I loved it. You told the truth in a way no way has done. Keep up the good work and look forward to reading more of your work.