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by christinamonroe

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I'd have

liked it to be longer. You got into developing the characters which is wonderful. I just think the storyline should have been more devoloped as well. Interested to see where you take it.

odie121odie121over 18 years ago
this could prove very interesting....

..you have set a nice stage for a NonConsent type story...

and have a feeling things are going to get hot.....

odie121odie121over 18 years ago
this could prove very interesting....

..you have set a nice stage for a NonConsent type story...

and have a feeling things are going to get hot.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great start

Hi

Let's have more...starting well - go for it let your imagination really run wild! More humiliation please if possible Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
liked it but

so far so good but it ended way too soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Incorrect use of 'whom'...

...otherwise really good.

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