All Comments on 'Lost Inside'

A sad tale ~ diverging loves and lives.

"Closing the door on that little room,

the one he found and then consumed.

He's moved ahead, and left her there.

While she tries not to stare."

That feeling of emptyness comes across rather well.

Sad but good poem.

DC:

The Ultimate and final farewell, with a vengence. Ronnie W.

DC:

Are what might have been. Thank You. Ronnie W.