All Comments on 'Denial'

Looking, never moving,

waiting for fate's act;

the penalty for inaction ... ...

Your Poem was Mentioned in the

"New Poem Reviews" thread

thanks for the journey Art~

Have you been cleaning out closets

or what ?????

I loved this, with your never miss

a beat rhyming sense and the whole

idea of your 'starcrossed fate' point.

***** for you.

-sGp-