All Comments on 'The Graveyard'

by DG Hear

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wetapapwetapapover 18 years ago
good one,

made me horny and hungry, ugh. a fan always.

sacksackover 18 years ago
a bit gross....

This might have been a bit overboard in the gross department. Things can be scary and forbidding without resulting in a collection of body parts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good Going

DG:

You certainly have my vote. Good going. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
How do you do it?

How do you write a sexual story one week, a humorous story the following week, a non erotic the next, then follow it by a grossed out horror story the following week. Great Halloween story. You Got my vote. What are you writing next?

Bob in Chicago

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I guess

I don't follow with the rest of them. I didn't find anything good about that story except when it ended. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I like it!

It was a good horror story. That's what you wrote it as. It kept my interest from beginning to end. The story flowed.Like most of your stories, you don't beat around the bush. You always seem to come to the point. That what I like about you writing. You got my vote.A Fan

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
not bad

its ok. average.

-Long Wang

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Could have done more

I think you could have done a lot more with this. The timing is off, with a woman being raped by several in the time it took her husband to run fifty yards. More details, gruesome and sexual, would have increased the tension of the story. I read and edit hundreds of stories, and I like you style greatly, just felt that you rushed this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not very frightening

The action happened to quickly without enough "solid" detail, and there was (apparently) zero chance of escape. That is okay, but don't these stories usually offer SOME chance until the very end? If the last character had himself become a ghoul at some point (transformed), that might have been different. Perhaps he even ate one of his friend's girlfriends and woke up feeling full! He he...

Crystal GoddessCrystal Goddessover 18 years ago
Better luck next time..

Lost me in the first two paragraphs...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
lovea

i liked your story. alittle short but good.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 10 years ago
Nice flash

It was fun and quick and ended well - heh

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