by RandomOne2
this was one of the lamest most boring stories I've ever read.............the only thing it got up was my blood pressure for wasting my time reading it................
commenting. The story jumped around, brought in subjects that had nothing to do with the main premis, had spelling errors and grammatical errors. And where is the incest in all of this? Keep trying but get yourself an editor
Terrible story... I would suggest you go back to your day job..a writer you will never make.
I loved the story idea....the writing needs work....but the story is great.
You expect me to beleive that ? the story was great but you should have walked in to your b day party naked an d ended it there the gun bullshit was stupid are you even 18 yet ?
it was an alright story and it wasnt ment to have incest in it, it was "Taboo" for Exhibitionism
I'm not if this was a story, or just the introduction.
But it's all a bit confusing.......
Another very nice story! Don't mind the detractors ... Everyone just wants sex, sex, sex! I am also a nudist and exhibitionist ... But I know how to act, given the situation ... Once, I and a girlfriend went to a TGIF Fridays for a few drinks ... After a couple of beers, we decided to try Long Island Ice Teas ... They didn't have much of an effect on me, but my girlfriend got wasted ... They went straight to her head ... I had to practically carry her out to the car ... When I got her inside, she peed herself completely! So, I stripped her soaking pants off and drove home ... I carried her inside, and realized everything else was wet too ... So I stripped her naked, and laid down next to her in silk shorts and a t-shirt until she came to. I got her revived, and she went home ... Things like that happen occasionally ... We had great sex the next day!