by LustyLee77
"I can't wait to get into her sultry little panties, she is hot!!!"
This is a great story of a couple entering into the world of sex where the wife takes on multiple partners. I think it is absolutely hot and consider LustyLee one of the best writers on this site.
the_onewolf
would any one think this was arousing??? I'm sorry - it was so pathetically repetitive - an old script - played over and over without regard for the lack of sensual erotisism - just stupid brainless crude unhuman crap.
You can't be proud of this replay can you writer?
to write very good erotica, but for some reason you've resorted to sophomoric phrases (heinie-hole)and totally implausible scenes. Yes, this is a fantasy, but I would like to know who's? My suggestion is to write about a sexual episode from your "real life", can the profanity, and you will see the result will be a big improvement over this story.
...If you dont like this type of story why read it? This is a story that is raw, erotic and very arousing. Well done
if you disagree you don't have to go to jail.its ok to disagree in this country.the story was abusive.
HOT HOT HOT!!! Just like I like it, baby, well done!!! Some people just can't handle the HEAT!!!
I hadn't have read five of your other stories first. They're basically all the same, just different names and situations. Way too predictable. You do seem to have a little writing talent but you need to break out of writing the same old story time after time.
lol Good story. Went for the heart of what makes something worth reading.
Great fantasy, BUT a 14 inch cock up her ass without any lube, she would be screaming so loud it would bring the police or she would need stitches or surgery to repair her sphincter, and wouldn't be able to shit for months.....