by naradragonfly
This is a gorgeous twist on the tale of the Arabian Nights! Well done! Sharizade seemed absolutely lovable!
what a wonderful touching story. you are definitely a great story teller
WOW. Just WOW. This is a wonderful modification on a classic story, I have no other words, just wow, this was incredible, please never stop writing.
Wow this story had me crying like a baby. I love all the emotions you've wrapped into it.
great story sounds a lot like the arabian nights story, i loved the passion.
And you wrote it so well ;) It was breathtaking and lovely and well-done. Especially the secrets.
~Mozzarella
the story was sweet and well developed, it wasnt completely about sex and it kept me guessing, i guess that was the point. ;-) please keep writting!!!!!!
Well done... It's like from a romance novel... I sincerely hope that you show off for the world to see... It's a pity that you have to write it in a porn site... Please hone it and nurture it...
a modern twist on arabian nights? Whether that was your inspiration or not i enjoyed very much. Thank you for sharing :o)
Hmm, 1001 Arabian Nights? Interesting.
Your twist on it didn't detract from the beauty of the tale, and your mastery of the language served only to enhance the reality of the story. Well done (:
I really did like the story. Although I do have to offer my constructive criticism. I don't think that most viewers and I like to see that wolves stay in power and what not. I know it isn't the point of the story, but it really got to me.
Other than that, i thoroughly enjoyed this story
It was a very pleasant read. I was drawn in by the name itself. Quick question, What culture does the name originate or was it just made up? Anyways I love the tales that shows human flaws, makes it more believable since the human race is one overly "flawed" species. Anyways I wish there was some kind of follow up or small continuation to the story. However, it still is a very good read as is. Thank you for writing.
Beautiful story especially the end where the wolf-king plays shay's "i will tell you tomorrow" game. :).
I love reading stories with wolves in them and here in this story you have written a tale worth reading again and again. :) I enjoyed the background story and the continuing of the 'tell you tomorrow' game at the very end. Well written indeed. Please write some more works like this, you have loving fans just waiting to read more. :)
This was a really good story. I almost wish it could have been longer...that you could extend their story. It was really beautiful. I loved the whole way that the boy dealt with the king and how the king showed mercy that he hadn't shown in years. It was clever how the kid dealt with him and sweet when he explained what his mom had taught him. A bit funny too that he managed to do this for centuries. Sweet HEA ending. I really enjoyed it.
who wrote an entire world around a version of Scheherazade which was awe inspiring and fabulous. and now i know two people who did that, because that story was as fantastic as they come, perfectly proportioned and completely thrilling.
i so love this one...and now its the King's turn to keep his love and mate by his side!
OMG ! I loooved this story - so much magic, so much love - beautiful, seductive and utterly spellbinding.
Too sexy for words.
I absolutely WILL re-read this story (like all your other writings), because I'm just completely bewitched by it - fascinated ! I nearly expected too hear the genie of the lamp ! Please give us more joyful magic !! :)))
That was.....AMAZING!!! I loved every bit of it! 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😋😋😋😋😋😋😋👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏💟❤💙💚💛💜💓💕💖💗💘💝💞💟
I like the theme and the idea of the whole story! So creative and I loved the whole thing!
Amazing, truly, the ending struck me like a chord, very good story
This is much more than an adaptation of a classical story... This feels poetic to my heart.