why you would deny poets the beauty of these pens...the dancer posing as her words wrap round the mind and creating such a warm inviting picture...you work is always a creation I want to strive for..ty/blue
I'm impressed - lends new meaning to the thought of painting with words.
of the skill it took to craft this poem.
...when I saw her in the forum and relieved she didn't languish there. Lovely and inventive spacial, jim.
Even without the visual form, this would have been exceptional! The extra visual is a nice bonus and highlights a beautifully phrased mini-masterpiece!
lovely work, soft and delicate as the form of her. thoroughly enjoyed this
simply put - nicely done
"Beautiful" in every way!
on the website
just wanted to let you know
Reminiscent of 20th century teletype produced kitsch 'art'; nice, but with computers you can do better.
A stunningly beautiful poem and worthy of the highest accolade, truly inspirational. Thank You jthserra.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
and when I came upon this poem linked, I had to read it. Excellent work and I think I have finally come to understand why you rarely frequent the poetry board. It is a loss to those of us who stay and waddle through the junk that is acclaimed and praised. An era ended when you "left."
Beautiful words in a beautifully laid out form on paper! Superb!
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