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I can't imagine
why you would deny poets the beauty of these pens...the dancer posing as her words wrap round the mind and creating such a warm inviting picture...you work is always a creation I want to strive for..ty/blue
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I'm impressed - lends new meaning to the thought of painting with words.
Simply envious..
of the skill it took to craft this poem.
Impressed....
...when I saw her in the forum and relieved she didn't languish there. Lovely and inventive spacial, jim.
Tess
very cool....
Even without the visual form, this would have been exceptional! The extra visual is a nice bonus and highlights a beautifully phrased mini-masterpiece!
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lovely work, soft and delicate as the form of her. thoroughly enjoyed this
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simply put - nicely done
Love it!
"Beautiful" in every way!
My favorite poem
on the website
just wanted to let you know
Fair
Reminiscent of 20th century teletype produced kitsch 'art'; nice, but with computers you can do better.
In awe
A stunningly beautiful poem and worthy of the highest accolade, truly inspirational. Thank You jthserra.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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I am a fan
and when I came upon this poem linked, I had to read it. Excellent work and I think I have finally come to understand why you rarely frequent the poetry board. It is a loss to those of us who stay and waddle through the junk that is acclaimed and praised. An era ended when you "left."
Nice!
Beautiful words in a beautifully laid out form on paper! Superb!
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