All Comments  for

Delusional Ballet

byjthserra©
All
Comments (14)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/13/05

I can't imagine

why you would deny poets the beauty of these pens...the dancer posing as her words wrap round the mind and creating such a warm inviting picture...you work is always a creation I want to strive for..ty/blue

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz10/13/05

~~

I'm impressed - lends new meaning to the thought of painting with words.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by cymry10/13/05

Simply envious..

of the skill it took to craft this poem.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/13/05

Impressed....

...when I saw her in the forum and relieved she didn't languish there. Lovely and inventive spacial, jim.

Tess

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sack10/14/05

very cool....

Even without the visual form, this would have been exceptional! The extra visual is a nice bonus and highlights a beautifully phrased mini-masterpiece!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Maria239410/14/05

:)

lovely work, soft and delicate as the form of her. thoroughly enjoyed this

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by twelveoone10/14/05

*

simply put - nicely done

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by 10/15/05

Love it!

"Beautiful" in every way!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by lindiana03/12/06

My favorite poem

on the website

just wanted to let you know

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous03/13/06

Fair

Reminiscent of 20th century teletype produced kitsch 'art'; nice, but with computers you can do better.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Gaia_Lorraine05/18/06

In awe

A stunningly beautiful poem and worthy of the highest accolade, truly inspirational. Thank You jthserra.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by LeBroz09/26/07

~~

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.



----------

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by emma_tate12/09/09

I am a fan

and when I came upon this poem linked, I had to read it. Excellent work and I think I have finally come to understand why you rarely frequent the poetry board. It is a loss to those of us who stay and waddle through the junk that is acclaimed and praised. An era ended when you "left."

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by InkedPoet07/23/11

Nice!

Beautiful words in a beautifully laid out form on paper! Superb!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Delusional Ballet  or
More submissions by jthserra.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel