by *Snatch
I gave it a 75 only because it was too short! Otherwise a lovely story. I'll be sure and read more of your work.
One other thing I might say is that in the writing of the story you might want to think about "leading" the action a little more, build up for the "climax" as it were.
Thanks for the story!
I LOVE to watch women masturbate to orgasm! And when water is involved, I turn to mush!
Seeing the energy, the deep need, the building warmth, the sparking, the fire, the explosion!
Your story has me so hot right now. I cannot relieve myself of the pressure for now, but you will be in my dreams tonight.
For you to fully come at the pressure of a spa jet is SO sexy, SO erotic, SO beautiful. Your description of the positions you assume make me feel like I am right there with you. I want to take my wet fingers and push in, turn up and massage your g-spot right where and when you need it to have the greatest orgasm of your life. Adding a waterproof vibrator would give you the release you deserve. Holding you as you come down would give me such a sense of warmth and affection for you. Thank you, my sweet!
I do a similar thing, just rocking my hips back and forth on the jet tub vents. Such an amazing orgasm! Good write up!