All Comments on 'A Stranger Pays a Visit'

but you'd think they'd be a little afraid...good story, great imagination. Good luck in the contest.

erotic halloween stories!!! That was great, Jordanna! You should do one that takes place in a cemetery :) Oh, this is Heather from myspace.....

Great job, sweetie! I loved every moment of it ;)

Kisses,

Meg

I was startled by your graphic maturbation. It effectively put me back on my erotic heels. Once the roomy came into the picture and then penetration occurred, yoou had me. Good stuff. - David from Dallas

I hope you keep writing for all of our reading pleasure. I throughly enjoyed the story. XX Cheri

Gosh, for a first time submitter you are going to excel. Such hot articulate and graphic images. Sure hope you continue to contribute stories. Had to vote you a 5. First time out is excellent.....WOW!!

Gosh, for a first time submitter you are going to excel. Such hot articulate and graphic images. Sure hope you continue to contribute stories. Had to vote you a 5. First time out is excellent.....WOW!!

wow our fav. groupie is quite the writter ... your story was really good .... hit us up sometime ..

Dead~Riff

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Requiem~Within

wow such great images.....got me a lil wet sittin here reading it...great job ;-)

~dark angel~

Well I guess they haven't really, I'm impressed babe, you have a great imagination. xoxoLiz

Very well written for a first time contributor. Please submit more like it!!!! Good Luck in the Contest!!