by Nigel Debonnaire
That was wonderfully written, absolutely perfect!! Thank you very much!!
I wish you were letting us vote on this one, it was truly beautiful even in a creepy and vampiric way. Your writing has grace and sensualism even during a beating. I'm very impressed and hope to see a lot more of your work.
I liked this story but I would hope sometime you write a story where the vampire doesn't want to kill himself I find the vampyres like Louis from interview with the vampyre are annoying in their whining and lamenting.
It's erotic, it's romantic. couldn't be better.
Wow that was really Excellently Written aside from a few Grammar Errors Hare and there but Nothing That can't be forgiven. At least it's Better Written than most on this site. Also I loved where took this Story, to be honest I thought it might haven gone a deferent direction very deferent direction.