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by RedHairedandFriendly

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Wow! Now this is powerful !!

sacksackover 18 years ago
bittersweet...

In the second stanza, consider replacing "sits" with "rests".

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Living respected and dying regreted

The pain is gone and the memories linger on. Outstanding. Thank You. Ronnie W.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
touching

I like the flow and the way this read, The touching words that I feel from reading this, leaves my mind....no longer there <grin>

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
touching

I like the flow and the way this read, The touching words that I feel from reading this, leaves my mind....no longer there <grin>

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
ALONE IN A CASKET

being farewelled. TK U MLJ LV NV

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