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Beneath the Towers

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone10/18/05

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the better of the two, this one has arresting images

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by sack10/18/05

cool little poem...

makes a big impact within its small compass

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by Anonymous10/18/05

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"they ignored her
dune climb as the black
beach bogged her footprints."

I could totally see this, and it reads wonderfully

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by 10/18/05

A very visual Poem!

The imagry was wonderful in this. It's short but says a lot. There is easily enough here to write a story from.

You have a nice easy style!

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by Anonymous10/19/05

Cool!

Love those last two strophes in particular!

Fly

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by Bill Dada01/26/06

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Good poetry is great exercise for the mind, and my mind just had a great work out.

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by LeBroz01/19/07

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POW ~ this has got really powerful impact with imagery that keeps your eye on her final walk.

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by duddle14602/08/07

Wonderful.

The imagery in this rendering was just outstanding. Very enjoyable.

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by tazz31707/13/12

LEAVING HER WORLD BEHIND

she trod into the future. TK U MLJ LV NV

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