All Comments on 'Vinegar and Brown Paper'

I especially liked the line "I will teach you to whistle through the grass".

Thank you Anna for the best read of the day! It is almost perfect. Only, "heavy" and

"one body will bounce back

half the height

all of the momentum."

caused a slight hitch in my reading. Why "heavy" and not "heavily"? In the bouncing I wonder about your physics. :) (Oh yeah, where does the vinegar come in?)

Keep writing like this and your own words may come true!

"Poets and lovers pass their

language down generations,

they will whisper my name to you,

they will teach you the words never spoken."

You may fix my head with vinegar and brown paper anytime (it could probably use it).

This was amazingly lovely. Thank you.

The comments were more confusing than the poem. I think I'll stick to the poems today. Loved this one.

ty,bd

I really loved this:

I want to roll down the hill with you

without crowns or brown paper,

knees unstained, ankles unsprained

dizzy and seven years old.

That's great writing!

Curiouswife

Wistful and lovey! Some confusing language, but I liked it.

Fly

best way to learn poetry is by reading a good poem, such as this, the best way to live, is by experiencing ...

words such as these.

and certainly thinking of the cleansing aspect as to the removal of the scars. as always good work........don

without comment, just praise for the better poet