All Comments on 'Drop The Rake'

Just goes to show

that Peter Pan lives;

all you need do

is to grasp it...

love the delightful wordplay! Thanks for sharing this gem!

You took me there -- in the moment -- in the leaves -- as a good poem should do! ~Imp

Beautiful imagery and metaphor.

I love the fall and the leaves and a good roll on the ground.

Thanks for sharing this.

the metaphor stands out.......nicely done......don

poem, Bel...You wrote this in a perfect time!!

~Honey

for reminding me of home... and the soft spot that lives in my heart for all things autumn and young.

Always, E

to your wonder and joy, Bel. And please keep sharing it with the rest of us - this was lovely. Thanks, LJ.

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