All Comments on 'Voluntary Abuse'

If you don't love your sister and treat her like a whore you are in real trouble.

did ask for it..but you need to proofread.

it's got everything i love, hot sex, and rough sex, gotta love it, got me so hot i had to get myself off!! keep up the good work

I never thought anything like that would get me off, but I ended up having an orgasm while reading it. I have to either be the only girl who can get off so fast, or you just did a really good job. *wink*

Hey it would have popped 4.8 if you had just done a tad more proofreading. Get you an editor next time. You show real skill here. Very hot. She did ask for it, but bubba should know she doesn't know shit from packed shit about ass cracking gorilla fucking. I think he just wanted an excuse to abuse a cute little girl, which he most definitely did. But what the hell...this is just the kinda site that caters to the gorilla mentality.

we all, at some point in our lives, fantasies about a situation like that.. Nice story.. should follow it up with the rest of the weekend.

Keep up the good work.

All females should be fucked and fucked hard. Whether they be sister,niece, mother, grandmother, cousin etc. That is why women have a pussy.

Ya baby, kept me stiff but please proofread. This could have been the best if it did not have mistakes that are a real turn off.

I wish I had a brother that would take me as His whore.. My pussy was soaking wet .. thank you for the orgasm ;)

loved the story but does need proof reading, once or twice is enough times describing the 9 inches anymore than that sounds like you are trying to convince yourself it's 9', try keeping it real, she swallowed a cup of your cum ? lol get real that would be 8 ounces however i did enjoy your story.

loved it!

u need more stories!!!

plz make em!!

very excellent story. enjoyed every stroke of it. i, like others, request more stories from you.

boi dat was a real dread story.

almost got off wtf

could use some proofreading , but other than that is was...great!!

man thanks for that, it was very well written and it brought back a lot of memories for me and my sis

That was so fucking hot! Man, if only.

just had an orgasm. this story made my pussy soaking wet.

I did not even finish the story and I got so wet. Huh. Please keep on writing.

Great writing... I was hard as a rock, visualizing fucking such a young, small & tight little minx.

This is THE MOST BADASSED INCEST I have EVER read. And why the hell did u write only one, pls write more, continue this masterpiece.

Looking forward to more on these characters..

very good

I agree