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.......and the words

did not flow,

but scorched the parchment

in which they became !

*winks*

-sGp-

Pompous spewers of drivel never had a more worthy opponent. Love it! But do I detect a less than reverential view of Scientology? Cymry does have her wits about her and they are ever so sharp.

and it's nice to see another take a stab at dianetics......nice job......don

I really was ready to blast you for the way it started, what can I say last two lines explained it, has me in laughter.

It snuck up on me, but that's okay, I probably deserved it!

Well done.

You go gurl !!!

Very witty and seething ... Grrr ~

Would not wanna be on the other end

of that punch ~!!

More Plez~

...you don't.

ty,bd

So, what makes this poetry? Not what Webster or my college classes define as poetry. Sorry. Kinda clever, but not poetry. More like crapola.

Love it! Anothr fav with spirit and grit. Don't cross this gal or you'll regret it.

She's no Ron Hubbard ~ but who is or wants to be.

It sounds like it's about more than just Mr. L. Ron Hubbard. Patricia

I love irreverence and hole pokers in pompous 'know it all's, and that's what I found here.

Let the words of the title serve as a warning to any pretentious B.S. coming this poet’s way... I suspect it’s as much about people going about laying their ultimate truths in thick layers on others, as it is on the pseudo science aka as Scientology. Clearly, this poet makes it abundantly clear that she could not care less for 'know it all's', who can't wait to ‘open your eyes’…