All Comments on 'Taking Mom's Place'

very good first story. The subject matter, the imagination, setting. You go girl....give me some more slutty behavior - fucking daddy while mommy watches - great stuff! You sweet slut!!

I really loved the story. It was very nice, especially for a first submission. I am looking forward to reading more.

very good story and keep up of ch. 02 thanks cfh

Sorry, but this was pretty derivative and dull. Maybe there's no room for reality in fantasies, but this lacked any belivability. On a positive note, you're dialogue isn't half bad....

Keep going....not the best story but a nice start...I would like to hear more...did get me wet!

Hope there's more where this came from!

I LIKE THE STORY. I WOULD HAVE LIKED IT TO BE LONGER BUT YOU GOT SOME GOOD FUCKING INTO IT. You got the attention of my cock. My fucking prick got hot and hard and I would love to fuck the two commenters that got so wet.

Keep the stories cumming. John P

this is so sick stories like this should be out lawed

Ok thats one hellva offer on your bio page and one hot story!

Hope you do more story's

you hot bitch

Yummy. So wet, and wanting more.

God this almost the exact same thing that happened with me, my ex wife and daughter, except our daughter was a lot younger than 18 and when my wife left the room she went in to our sons room and sucked and fucked his cock until he unloaded 3 loads deep inside her. That weekend we rearragned our living arrangements, daughter I moved into the den that was a coverted garage and almost seperate from the house and son moved into the bedroom with my wife, a couple months later we found out that wife was pregnant with thier first child, it's been 8 years now, 4 years ago we sold our house and bought a homestead in the Southwest so we could live as 2 couples but we all play together alot. Daughter and wife love each others pussies almost as much as they love sons and I's cocks, we are a bog loving family.

yum this was so hot. my parents are older so they don't fuck as much anymore but i always wish they still fucked like animals so i could join them and have my pussy fucked HARD by my beloved daddy mm im so slutty i just want my daddy to fuck me so bad