All Comments on 'The Crutch'

last six lines ~ Simple enough for me to understand, but so devilishly delicious.

as many of your offering do! Bravo!

Guess the thermometer will have to do.

Watch that weed's burning visage...

the first three lines are magical. I love the way the words feel in my head. I enjoy your looks inward and reflections outward, on life and earth. thanks for this one :)

I especially loved this line:

In the oil can with broken crutches, newsprint

and dry milk boxes, we burn the vines with five leaves.

Great imagry!

Curiouswife

"Your interpretations are self-inflicted"

Short build to the last line but packed with vivid images.