All Comments on 'Pool of Dreams Ch. 02'

Very very E-R-O-T-I-C!!!!! I can't wait to read the rest of your stories! My dick is hard.

What's with all the chicks getting pregnant at the same time? Don't you know that's biologically impossible?

haha! every single one getting pregnant!...lol...great story

Great story especially with all the girls getting themselves in the pudding club!

Lucky bloke only wish it was me having a feast of sex and finding girls so willing.

Thanks. Keep writing stories like this, certainly made me hard.

John

lol the getting pregnant bit while not impossible it is just highly unlikely that a guy could blow that much and that the chicks would be ovulating at the same time. but never the less great story big fan of your others please write more

however there have been study's that show that when women spend a lot of time with each other they tend to ovulate around the same time.

i thought this story was kinda dumb

The possible may be erotic and stimulating, but a fairy tale always sounds like something fake.

Wasn't even half believable. I couldn't even stay hard reading such a stupid story.

This was great. I just wished the sex scenes had lasted a little longer. It's a pity he couldn't stay and have sex with them while they were pregnant. Maybe you could do a epilogue story with them fucking in college and maybe have a flashback of that month as he should have fucked all 12 girls a lot more for them all to get pregnant. Or if not, do a side story of Katie's parents time in France and all the sex adventures they could of had.

Cumming in 12 Hot teenagers in one afternoon?

Nice fantasy fucking.

Still a wonderful imagination.

Also , all 12 getting pregnant?