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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
ah...

that grindstone of life...know it well...lovely liar...sighs...blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good

I think you take too long building the metaphor, but it is a good one. You probably don't need S1 AND S2.

Fly

sacksackover 18 years ago
intriguing comparison.

I don't think you took too long to build this up, and would keep stanzas one and two!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
excellent poetry

inspirational liar (~_~)

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