All Comments on 'Between a Story and A Song'

it's cute but this just reads like a greeting card. if this didn't have such precious, forced rhymes (niche and rich?) it might have been easier to explore the tight space you describe. try and rewrite this without the rhyming and i bet it's a much better piece, because the idea is good and there are some cool phrases here.

I dreamt this poem one night cause it seems really familiar <bigrin> great poem and I love the concept of being caught between a story and a song since I write both <grin> a gem of a poem (~_~)

Ahhh, the plight of the poet

Caught in the middle ~

The best of both world's creativity

The worst of their income...

A wordsmith trying to find his voice.

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a lark or a lick and a promise. TK U MLJ LV NV