Well done, Mr. Smy3th. Susan
Very descriptive story, I was laughing very hard at the mental picture you drew, up until the kids came in (not cool!). But I sure would have liked to see the look in the telemarketer's face! Also, I was waiting for the fire department to show up after the smoke alarm went off!
Pricelessly funny! Woke my sub I was laughing so hard. Keep up the good work!
A wild alternate ending. Mr. Smyth has done himself up proud as well as tickle the hell out of his reader's funny bones. I loved this story as things went wildly out of control. Loved the telemarketer phone call. Great Read. Lottsa fun!
Much better thatn Part I
Wonder how it would read if both were fused.
Too bad a stranger didn't track her down and avail himself on her charms while she was postin while alone
I laughed a lot
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