Motel Maid

Very Nice and a nice gentle twist too!

I really enjoyed this one, as I said nice twist.

well done

Eureka! A very nice story emerges from a usually cringe-inducing category. It was not degrading to anyone, yet was told with a wink toward silly old stereotypes and with a great deal of humor and self-depreciation. Additonally, there were a couple of nice twists thrown in that made for an unpredictable ending. Very nicely done.

great job

Not the most erotic graphic story I've read but certainly one of the best. Had me smiling from almost the start.

Good

Nice little story. I enjoyed it very much.

Boyd

Very Good

I enjoyed reading your story. It was light and sexy all in one. I wish I could have the good luck in finding the same situation. I believe in would be most pleasurable. Nicely written also. Keep up the great work.

A GREAT STORY

I loved this story. gentle_man is a great writer.

More u got the feel

have read a few stories but this is easily one of my better ones

Loved It!

Just surfing and looking for some good erotica to read. I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Hopefully I'll read another one of your stories soon.

Chocolate Cupcake:)

Great writing...

I thought it was a wonderful story. Honest... Not everyone is model size or porn hung. I loved the fact that neither of them were perfect....made it sexier somehow.

Great Story, Would love to read more from you

I truly loved your story, Keep the writings coming. I look forward to reading more stories from you.

Uhm.....

I'm sorry but that's just a tad...no a smig gross....but entertaining none the less good job!

Kudos!

Great story! I was laughing through out the story, but the END was so unexpected and clever! Great read!


BTW... I'm also black, but wasn't offended. Don't take the critics to heart, it was great!

Enjoyed

I liked it a lot
Thank you

Loved it!

I could profuse all day, but I'll just say, wow!

Masterfully written tale

Hard to beat a little black pussy from time to time. They know how to fuck; you know how to write.

Very

Cute. Looking for more on them, soon.

Loved it!!!

Maybe ill get my black pussy fucked like that one day

Grrrrreat story!

This is one of the most memorable and one of my favs. You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work.

Wish list

How I wish I could experience something like this too!! Great story

Awesome

This was a great story!!! Loved it.

Great!!

I never give a 5rating, but you get the first one!! This was a very enjoyable story. I really really like it. I'm sure I will be back to reread it from time too time.
Now I'm going to look for your other postings. Again Thank You for a great read.

*****

Five.

damn that was nice. 5

Good story lots of humour sah

2 stars

I hated it!

Loved it. I guess the last anon is a black man who can't stand a black woman loving a white man.