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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
?

What part of this was about nonconsent??? This story should of been labeled non-erotic as nothing happened in it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
WTF

WTF????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
... Uh, no.

It was a fabulous beginning, really... But the fact that NOTHING happened, and what little of sexual activity that was spoken up consisted of about a sentance.... I hate to say it, but this story sucks. Hide it unless you're finished with it next time, this was really boring!

patty_parker60patty_parker60about 9 years agoAuthor

Hullo, Darlings! I will be adding add'l chapters to

this tale, possibly with LILA JURGENS + AND

NURSE HARRIETT GANG-BANGED BY THE

FEMALE HOSPITAL STAFF AT THE SAME TIME...

What do U think??!!

patty_parker60patty_parker60over 5 years agoAuthor
Feedback

For those who took the time to comment, y=thank you...as with any story series, there is an INTRODUCTION OF THE CHARACTERS, A BACK-STORY, THEN subsequent chapters address the eroticism this 'beginning' lacks...perhaps read 1-6 before finalizing your opinion?

becca_boobs27becca_boobs27over 5 years ago
I appreciate the "build-up" personally...

I've read the other chapters, as suggested...if others would do the same, I'm certain that others will agree, as I do (with you), that the wait is well worth it

dwalk1_2002dwalk1_2002over 5 years ago
re: becca_boobs27 comment

Agree 100%

jennijuggs2002jennijuggs2002almost 5 years ago
Now I understand

The 'buzz', I mean! I've heard about and read your stories on the yahoo! site, and you are just as good as advertised

karin_n_karinna1karin_n_karinna1almost 5 years ago
Jennijuggs

U will LOVE the rest of the series, and all of the rest of her stories...get ready for some SORE FINGERS (and CLIT!)

beybakkerbeybakkeralmost 5 years ago
Don't mind the brevity

The build-up is just right; doesn't bother me to get a little background on the characters, sort of like a scorecard in baseball. I have always been a fan

ample_annieample_anniealmost 5 years ago
as has been mentioned

it is not as long as some story, still PACKS A PUNCH

patty_parker60patty_parker60almost 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you, all

I dearly, truly, and evermore appreciate the time everyone who has read my work, especially those who left feedback. I feel that I have improved much since my first effort, due in no small part to those (constructive) comments.

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