by patty_parker60
What part of this was about nonconsent??? This story should of been labeled non-erotic as nothing happened in it.
It was a fabulous beginning, really... But the fact that NOTHING happened, and what little of sexual activity that was spoken up consisted of about a sentance.... I hate to say it, but this story sucks. Hide it unless you're finished with it next time, this was really boring!
Hullo, Darlings! I will be adding add'l chapters to
this tale, possibly with LILA JURGENS + AND
NURSE HARRIETT GANG-BANGED BY THE
FEMALE HOSPITAL STAFF AT THE SAME TIME...
What do U think??!!
For those who took the time to comment, y=thank you...as with any story series, there is an INTRODUCTION OF THE CHARACTERS, A BACK-STORY, THEN subsequent chapters address the eroticism this 'beginning' lacks...perhaps read 1-6 before finalizing your opinion?
I've read the other chapters, as suggested...if others would do the same, I'm certain that others will agree, as I do (with you), that the wait is well worth it
The 'buzz', I mean! I've heard about and read your stories on the yahoo! site, and you are just as good as advertised
U will LOVE the rest of the series, and all of the rest of her stories...get ready for some SORE FINGERS (and CLIT!)
The build-up is just right; doesn't bother me to get a little background on the characters, sort of like a scorecard in baseball. I have always been a fan
it is not as long as some story, still PACKS A PUNCH
I dearly, truly, and evermore appreciate the time everyone who has read my work, especially those who left feedback. I feel that I have improved much since my first effort, due in no small part to those (constructive) comments.