All Comments on 'Jade World'

of crystal polished into your shimmering world...nice..I want to write another one like it...sighs...blue

Another excellent poem. I love the images in this poem, so rich in detail. Excellent stuff!

Sunrise? Sunset?

Either way, a creative write!

I like the last phrase "sparkles of mirth" a lot! It leaves a warm feeling.

melded into an appealing poem! This one should have been illustrated, no?

Regretfully, this is just a collection of disjointed, though "colorful," words.

your words

like gemstones

placed and laced

careful on silver strings

reflections skitscattered

moments of memory

pretty precious things

lead bead and rise

to tears concealing

sharp shock shards

the shattered diamond cries

A great little picture you've painted here.