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Jade World

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/28/05

a glittering array

of crystal polished into your shimmering world...nice..I want to write another one like it...sighs...blue

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by cward210/28/05

Excellent!

Another excellent poem. I love the images in this poem, so rich in detail. Excellent stuff!

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by LeBroz10/28/05

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Sunrise? Sunset?
Either way, a creative write!

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by 10/28/05

Lovely images

I like the last phrase "sparkles of mirth" a lot! It leaves a warm feeling.

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by sack10/29/05

really interesting use of unusual color vocabulary

melded into an appealing poem! This one should have been illustrated, no?

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by Anonymous10/29/05

Words Should Mean Something

Regretfully, this is just a collection of disjointed, though "colorful," words.

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by lobomao10/30/05

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your words
like gemstones
placed and laced
careful on silver strings
reflections skitscattered
moments of memory
pretty precious things
lead bead and rise
to tears concealing
sharp shock shards
the shattered diamond cries

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by OSoBuff03/24/06

A wonderful little piece

A great little picture you've painted here.

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