WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW!
we got to watch the evolution of the kind of relationship I think we all wish for. Your bio and this story say you're from Texas, so at least that much is autobiography; if the rest is true, too, you're lucky to be living it, and we're grateful that you wrote it down for us.
This really made a good start to my night. Thanks for a nice read.
You did a fantastic job on this...great work.
Wonderful story. Made me me feel warm and fuzzy all over. And not much does that these days. Read it twice so I could get that feeling all over again.
Please write more along these lines.
Ya see? A story like this can and is sexy!! And warm, and loving! Not like the stories where the "white/black wife submits her body to a drug dealer/boss/gangsta/masterful, muscled neighbor. There's no love there. Just fucking. But this story! is truly about inter-racial love. Real LOVE.
The part of the story where Xiaoping offers her backdoor in true submission was hot! And her willingness to suck her man down to his hairy root was the best! So many women just take in the head and think "Oh yeah, lookit me, the BJ Queen!". NOT!
This was a real woman, truly in love with and willing to do anything(?) for her man. Not her cuck, her wimp, her gangsta, drug dealing black boyfriend. NO STEREOTYPES here!!
Just two above-average people who found each other, and went on to build a life with each other.
Real Life. For a very welcome change.
Story felt so real & amazing... I'm wishing that's what i have in the future.Well done, keep it up!
Wow, fantastic! I have this feeling that this is a "real" love story ;)
Who would have thought that I'd find a truly romantic story on Literotica!!?? A great story well written and nicely told. Truly a gem.
i read this story expecting the usual interracial theme, and often with racist notations. but this story really blew me away. you truly know how to write for women. i can feel how xiaoping felt every step of the story. how i wish i could find love like that in real life. sigh
You are one of my three favorite authors, and the first one I saw to entangle real, good, emotional love with great sexy writing. You have also taught me that over-explaination is as bad as under-explaination, by walking that fine line between them.
I also do wish there were more to this story, but I know how that is, too.
I appologize for not doing this sooner, but normally I hate to register at sites.
this is an excellent story,well written and doesnt irritate,unlike other interracial sories,this is believable.
I loved it - very likeable characters (what little we "saw" of them) - and the strong commitment of the relationship was vary nice. - A humurous story well written.
I do have a strong preference for oriental/Asian ladies - but unfortunately, never have been lucky enough to experience one.
Maybe in the next life :-)
I have to admire how you are able to create tales of great human value from so many different little things you have picked up from somewhere.
OK, but now the nits to be picked. Your really need to get friendly with those little gremlins of language, like the hyphen and the apostrophe.
Okay. Great. And? Did she fuck you with it or did she just put it on a shelf in the living room? I mean, what the fuck would you mention that for without contriving some situation where she strapped it over her little Chinese cunt and fucked your ass with it?
Short and intense relationship story. Loved it! Again, Wow.
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