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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/01/05

~0~

mentioned in the new poems thread.

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by My Erotic Tale11/01/05

eroticly pleasing

doc, you have a seductive pen! A very nice poem that was a poeticly laced tale of intrigue... (~_~)

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by Anonymous11/02/05

awesome

to see the other side so clearly. Thank you, Doc.

Boo

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by A Desert Rose11/19/05

I loved it!

"Conquers me with her surrender" what a marvelous line! And a line that says so much.

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by impressive02/12/06

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I was thinking "just okay" 'til the very last section, then POW! It could stand alone.

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by EllaRegina02/12/07

You have captured desire.

Highly erotic from bed to sky to bed again... It reminded me of a James Joyce poem. Good company you keep!

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by Deity03/26/07

dear god

that was amazing

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by swallowedscream03/04/08

I get

tingles down my spine when something really grabs me. You made me shiver. I know I will be reading this again. So much more I could say,but I'll just leave you with a "Wow" and a thank you.~D.

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by Anonymous02/04/10

Amazing

How you capture the heat of it all in words...

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