All Comments on 'Where You Take Me'

by oregon_gal

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I don't know why,

but you're poems really resonate with me. The imagery is clear, sparkling even. I like in this one the sense of love between the physical descriptions!

I look forward to more from you!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Another newbie!

Welcome to the world of Lit.

A good first read,

now let me see

what else you've writ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
first line

tongue tips dancing ..luv the alliteration...grabs the reader ..as the rest runs in waves of sensual moments...nice..welcome...bluerains

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
strong images.

you poem has very strong images, and the cadence is good. it reads well aloud, and the sensuality is paramount, enhanced by the lush images.

f-cynyrf-cynyrover 18 years ago
strong images.

you poem has very strong images, and the cadence is good. it reads well aloud, and the sensuality is paramount, enhanced by the lush images.

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