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Exotic Thought

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by Anonymous

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by sack11/06/05

I love this....

both "to converge" and "two converge" work!

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by My Erotic Tale11/06/05

double vision

exotic double vision is not always an orgasim but sometimes reading good poetry as this

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by LeBroz11/07/05

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Love the imagery and, especially the line, "witness a single thought." Very nice.

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by sweet GA peaches11/09/05

your blue..

supplies the thought,
and perfect imaginary-
to master to the letter,
sensual..

a pale blue orb
in drifts,
and settles peacefully
to a *grin*.


luv2theblu-

sGp

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by Bill Dada11/26/06

^

The tiger and river pass through the iris and converge into a gutsy grin? Very nice.

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by Bill Dada11/26/06

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The tiger and river pass through the iris and converge into a gutsy grin? Very nice.

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by duddle14611/26/06

Beautiful!

I loved word descriptions like pungent moorings. This well crafted verse left me marveling at it's simple beauty. Lovely Write!

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