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Onyx Dreams Ch. 08

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by Kyrla11/11/05

mmmmmm

Beautiful story and complex characters. I like what you've
done so far, but I have yet to see where you are going with this. So hopefully that means there is much more to come! :-D
-Kyrla

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by Anonymous11/11/05

ditto

i really really want to read on.

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