by oregon_gal
Very good! And that little green mark speaks volumes, saying more eloquently anything I may ever say...
on your E...I paused over the last line and sighed...it made the poem ...hugzharmony...bluerains
wonderful poem, strong images and you were able to convey the sense of gentleness and overwhelming love.
Beautiful- told so soft and gentle. It was as if I could literally feel the imagery. Very erotic.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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