All Comments on 'The Journey'

by BadEye50

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A bittersweet love story...

that sounds as though it is relating true events. I wish that he would have searched for Abby sooner, so that they would not have missed out on so many years. This was a very moving, touching and well-written story!

Randy01Randy01over 18 years ago
Inspirational

coming together of a brother and sister. I feel there must be an element of truth to this tender sweet story. I found it to be erotic and at the same time very romantic and tragic. Please keep writing, you have a future in short stories.

G-MacG-Macover 18 years ago
Good , but took to long

Is a very good story , but i find it hard to belive he had to wait till he was over 45 to find guts enough to go back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A story in it's own time frame..

A very good story, that leaves one glad to have read it.. 5*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A true story beautifully written.

What a love story! I found it more romantic than erotic. It makes me think that it could be author's own story. I am so touched that I'd cry with the couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great story!

Well written story. If true, it is too bad that it took so long for them to look each other up and get back together, especially after the sister started her own practice. Very romantic, and touching, story, none the less.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Touching

Great Story!! Hope you and Abby are happy!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow

I came here looking for a story and a quick jerk, however I'm leaving with a soft dick, but a warm feeling.

Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very warm

A wonderful story. It is crushing to go through so much pain and self doubt, for so many years. To feel this hurt every day, continually running through your mind for so long would be devastating.

I'm pleased you found your peace.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
True Love

It was a great story. That is how I feel about my sister but I can't bring myself to say or do anything about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
WOW!!!! Great Story

Beautiful love story.After reading your story i realised what true love is.Greatly done.

P.LighthouseP.Lighthouseover 15 years ago
Touching... Beautiful!

Unfortunately the maximum rate is a 5 and you deserve a 20!

I have no words to express what I felt reading your outstanding story. So short and so good!!!

Thank you and please... Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I miss my friend.

It has been almost a year since the passing of my friend BadEye. He was one of a kind and a very interesting person. I miss his advise, his jokes, his laughter, his neat way of doing things. I miss my friend!

Some things cannot be replaced.

Chickasawsam@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Almost another year without my friend!

I still miss my friend. It seems I miss him more this year that ever. Christams without his jokes, his laughter, and his smile, is not the same. As I said before, he cannot be replaced. I am sad but I smile when I think of my friend.

Sam

Chickasawsam@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
shame

just a shame he wasted so much time alone he could have kept in touch with the other girls when they got married and after the dad died he should have started looking for her then instead of wasting away alone a real shame it's good they finally got together but they will never get all the missing years back

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 13 years ago
Tragic yet sweet

It's a shame what happened to the brother. I'm just glad he was finally able to be with his sister. This was a real touching story!

ChickasawSamChickasawSamalmost 13 years ago
I miss my friend....

I read this story several times a year. It was written by my

best friend, BadEye50, who passed away a few years ago.

I miss my friend. He will never be forgotten.

P.LighthouseP.Lighthousealmost 13 years ago
Touching

Your story is beautiful!

Love is love and that is the most pure love I can imagine.

If that is a true story, I hope they finally have found the peace they deserved.

I have no enough words to describe my feelings about this love, so authentic, so sincere and so beautiful.

Congratulations! You are a really good writer.

Sorry for the bad quality of my English.

ChickasawSamChickasawSamalmost 13 years ago
Thinking of my friend..

I was just thinking about my friend and all the times we had together. BadEye you are loved and missed.

I love reading this story and about his life. I am glad I was part of his life.

Sam

ChickasawSamChickasawSamover 12 years ago
I thought of Adam today.....and everyday.

My friend has been on my mind this morning. I read his story again. I still miss him. Rest in peace my friend. I am proud that you were part of my life.

Sam

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
good story

nicely written-great characters-good sex scenes thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
not real good

the and his sister were both very stupid. he was stupid for not trying to find her sooner and not keeping track of her after he was disowned. she was stupid for not leaving home when he was disowned and believing her ass of a father. they don't deserve to be happy or each other they were just to stupid. the writer was just as stupid for leaving us hanging and not properly finishing this story.

trite_readertrite_readerabout 10 years ago
Hahahahaha!! The "not real good" fuckwit stikes again below!

This morons comments are hilarious! Always love to see what other inane bit of advice he has to offer! I think he was in a "special" education program of some sort....

Great story Mr Author, five stars for your efforts!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Some of us know

Some of us know what its like to feel this way. When your sister encourages you to play and you want to as well you realise that if its done right she will be with you for the rest of your life to pleasure you whenever is mutually convenient. To me that is the essence of a satisfying sibling relationship. Obviously for many it will become romantic and that feeling of intense love and lust together is the most awesome sexual feeling you will ever experience. In old age my brain flashes the sexual highlights of my years and years of having my sister in all ways possible. Its the best,

unclemerv77unclemerv77about 1 year ago

Very good, very enjoyable

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