All Comments on 'Sara and Charley's Journey Ch. 01'

by Steve1613

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nicely done

If you can keep the story line so that he shows his continued love for her, this will be an awesome story. Looking forward to the next Chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The dog

Haha, the detail about the dog wondering what the hell they were doing rings so true to life. My submissive and I always laugh at how our little dog always seems a bit confused by what we're doing when we play.

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