All Comments on 'Something Old, Something New Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great

I love this story. Yes, it is short but it was still really good.

BahamaBahamaabout 11 years ago
Awesome

Better than I thought

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
No sense of who they are

I don't very any sense if who the older woman is, or of romantic build up. What do they see in each other (besides the younger womans beauty). I don't fuel any emotional connection to anyone in the story. Very superficial.

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