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Kinesthesia Recall

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by Anonymous

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by sweet GA peaches11/11/05

(((((((( BLU ))))))))

You are simply beautiful..

The last lines were my
favorite, oh and the first..
through 8th.. *grins*..

I hope you saved
your patchworks,
to linger,
to when you have left
this world, so that
your soul will
continue to move ..
the earth,
and bleed the oceans ..

luv2theblu,

-sGp-

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by lobomao11/11/05

•) awesome!!!!

a patchwork
enjoyed in both directions
held up close for comfort
each part shines
their separate songs
from across the room
or over here
each skipstep lace loop
delights and lights our eyes
while the rest of us
try our senses

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by My Erotic Tale11/11/05

recall

nice write blue~ from mind to pen~ poetry in the end

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by sack11/12/05

one of your best...

reads very well...bravo!

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by LeBroz10/09/06

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Another fine piece of abstract imagery...

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by Anonymous12/05/06

write more of these

complex like a puzzle..keep it up Q

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by duddle14612/05/06

Mysterious!

Morsels of words ~ food for the soul. So mysterious - yet enchanting. Lovely!

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