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by RhymeFairy11/22/05

I am beginning to get a hankering ...

to do this ... kinda poetry.
You make it seem so easy and it all fits.
Just love it !! I can feel* tha planets
all lining up into view ... just them
... and you. Great imagery again in this one 4.

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by Anonymous11/22/05

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This poem was mentioned in the new poems review thread.

Tess

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by variable Xy11/25/05

Fabulous as always.

They say that every twenty-eight years we experience life changing moments, that the great planets are lined up the same as they were when we were born. I'm there right now and thanks for being there when I've had tough times. You've made it a little more bearable.

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by duddle14612/22/06

Not alone.

Perhaps our future is not foreseen in the stars but in the planets. Lovely mistical illustration A poetic basket of mystique.

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by Amyfriend01/25/07

We are not alone...

but 'the truth is out there'.

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by LeBroz02/02/07

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A little mystical look at our plane of existence; should the dark matter shift, then what?

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by LeBroz02/02/07

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A little mystical look at our plane of existence; should the dark matter shift, then what?

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by tazz31701/14/12

SOMEONE SHOULD HAVE NOTICED

now there are 8. TK U MLJ LV NV

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