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techreadertechreaderover 18 years ago
Interesting concept, but disappointing

I like the concept; summoned for an anonymous blow job. But it's difficult to write a coherent story in "second person" viewpoint, and you haven't succeeded with this one.

Keep trying; the story shows promise, and I'm sure that your future stories will be better.

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