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Ways Of The Flesh

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by Anonymous

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by dcpoet4411/16/05

i'll jump on this....

the poem that is...you've unleashed definite ways of the flesh. the spot that really sells this one is - neruda whore. it flows real nice too.......nicely done.....don

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by My Erotic Tale11/17/05

flesh

made my skin crawl back for more nice write (~_~)

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by sack11/18/05

exceptional.....

in the way you use words as well as the overall rhythm of the poem. A role model for other poems of this genre. Bravo!

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by twelveoone11/19/05

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I hope this was deliberate:
poppet
if not maybe it should be,
agree with below.

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by Syndra Lynn11/21/05

the best

erotic poem I have read in many, many moons.

bless you

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by Bill Dada12/06/05

Your words...

caress my imagination, like your tongue on your lover's flesh.
ty,bd

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