All Comments on 'A Good Little Housewife'

I like the idea of a person having the thoughts that turn you on. It shows you that sex is more in the mind than any where else.

All of us have our thoughts that we mnever share with others. If we did, no marriage could last.

You presented this is a very straight-forward manner, capturing the turmoil the longing for romance and personal needs.

Well done.

Beautifully done. I've been there on the male side of thoughts like that.

Just Plain Bob

This is SO true. Not only the fantasy part, but also the part of a spouse reaching a point in their married life when they feel neglected, or even unappreciated. And I can relate all too well to the "only mom can handle this". I too have had fantasies...and my husband gets the "benefits" or "rewards" of those fantasies every time. Touching and real. Thanks for voicing what so many people feel.

I'm impressed as it is to the point for some(many?) and very well written - I doubt if you have been there due to your personality but you must know some who have - haven't you.

Did you ask them if they could live with the depression caused by the dull unexpressed appreciation of others for the rest of their life or were they going to address it for better or worse - as it will get worse! For the record men do also feel this way at times - just as well as women.

Dismal but on track for some from the comments - the pain felt by me is that some apparently just begrudgingly accept it rather than discussing it with their partner. Then making changes as necessary - when one key family member suffers they all do subtly and more so eventually unless addressed and acted upon.

Nice talented work that provokes thought and hopefully considered action for those that related to it. "Life is not a dress rehersal" is it!!

In this talented work you are appreciated Author!!! with Regard

This kind of thing is very hard to do, and you pulled it off quite well. I'd like to read a sequel using this same woman in a sexual situation.

An excellent take on how a situation, a word, or a touch can fuel a fantasy.

Let it be so! The poor man won't know it but he be on the receiving end of those monumental tricks she's been learning and practicin' day and night while he's not home!

What a lucky, undeserving bastard! lol

The neighbor wife better be careful with the priest you`ll both look foolish and damd if the husband finds out.

pat

Atlanta,Ga

Very well written, capturing a feeling without wallowing in stroker material [not that there's anything wrong with that].

Regarding the above, I know it's the wrong denomination, but few other western religions can compete with Catholicism when it comes to the theatrics of the rituals (just a description). No wonder directors choose to present Catholic families in films in disproportionate percentage, compared with their number in the population at least in the US). But I am digressing. I could think of this submission as the first chapter to any new and updated Lady Chatterley. I am sure there are numerous Lady Chatterley out there all around us, AKA modern day desperate house wives (those who do not work two jobs of course or worse – who have recently lost their jobs...) <P>

Now, wait a minute! What about their desperate counterparts - going through the motions of life in quiet desperation, perhaps putting endless hours (and nowadays - they consider themselves lucky...) in mind numbing jobs, filling thankless, dead end positions (in Literotica all males characters are heads of corporations, or at minimum very wealthy... almost NO ONE is “just” blue collar working class...). Just something to think about...<P>

What I was missing in this very rich and sensitive potential of a future story is indeed the story itself. It's a great teaser, but as -is, it does not contain the minimum (for me) for a story, which would mean, having some development which rises from the introductory background provided at the beginning. What I am missing is the: “and then one day...” part (I trust that you would have no problems finding the right language, mine is just a generic place holder.) <P>

I'll be looking for your other submissions (as well as future works), hopefully in the stage of fully evolved stories...

I once read that our passion and pursuit of intense physical intimacy is somehow linked to the inner desire to be "one" with God...... This somehow always gives me comfort and awareness that this thing of ours.... is an intense form of that quest. Your story dances with and around that theme, which I wish there were more of.....

But Need a second chapter!